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I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Miss Parker. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Wednesday, 17 June 2020
Term 2 week 10 writing
This week for writing we did a sentence stacker on the Pixar short Piper. First we had to watch it first and we needed to chose the two chunks that we were going to write about. I wrote chunk 5 and 6 the 2nd one that I did was really short but I manged to write 9 sentences about it. Here are my 2 chunks that I did this week and here is a link to the short.
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